Student Work
The student work provided shows a great example of the feedback I will deliver to my students on essays. Students were instructed to write a two paragraph essay on the transition between a hunter gatherer society and an agrarian society. I provided feedback on content, grammar, and convention related problems. I also provided positive feedback for my students (InTASC Standard 1: a, i, and j). This test was posted to the Edmodo site for my classroom. The feedback was done on Edmodo. Students and parents can access this site to write notes to me and view the feedback and grades given for any test/assignment. The use of this website has allowed for a great amount of student, teacher, and parent conversations (ISTE Standard 3: a, b, c, d).
Download of Student Work
Download of Student Work